Thursday, June 4, 2009

NaiSaiKu

(via deviantArt)


Ravenous
Unfulfilled hunger
Desiring
Visceral semblance
Lascivious look
Desiring
Unfulfilled hunger
Ravenous


By Janet Jarrell

3 comments:

  1. Hi Janet, thanks for playing along, and rising to The NaiSaiKu Challenge?

    Very nicely written piece of poetry, I'm starving now!

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  2. Thank you Andy.

    This style of poetry is a good reminder to let your ideas be a bit less conformed - I like that.

    I'll be back.

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  3. Very nice poetry.
    Visit me please. I follow you please follow me.

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