Tuesday, March 30, 2010

I Am...

Struck...as
My lips remain dumb
I am in awe of myself

Dancing in the rings of the full moon
Working in the fields, harvesting time

Remembering me yet
Not knowing me
In want of me

Je suis
tu es
ils est
elle est
nous sommes
...
No second chances
Mark has butter sandwiches
and you and Mimee
Turn out ok
Goo goo ga joob...

7 comments:

  1. It has even a musical rythm! =)))) Great to see you writing again. I'm always missing you.

    Take care my dear! Much love from Brazil!

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  2. Hi Kenia,

    Always writing, thinking, working...not always posting!

    Love to you

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  3. Nice imagery and switching between settings, languages and time Janet.

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  4. Lovely poem. Nice feel and rhythm

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  5. Enjoyed the self-evaluation journey with multiple changes in rhythm along the way...and the perfect ending "Goo goo ga joob..."

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  6. New to your blog....love it and your poetry. Look forward to more. :-)

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  7. Nice and serene poem. a piece of peaceful emotions! loved it.
    Barkha Dhar
    http://dharbarkha.blogspot.com/

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