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Ravenous
Unfulfilled hunger
Desiring
Visceral semblance
Lascivious look
Desiring
Unfulfilled hunger
Ravenous


By Janet Jarrell
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  1. Andy SewinaJune 4, 2009 at 2:15 PM

    Hi Janet, thanks for playing along, and rising to The NaiSaiKu Challenge?

    Very nicely written piece of poetry, I'm starving now!

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  2. Janet JarrellJune 5, 2009 at 8:59 AM

    Thank you Andy.

    This style of poetry is a good reminder to let your ideas be a bit less conformed - I like that.

    I'll be back.

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  3. GROUP PUAS ADVENTURERJune 19, 2009 at 8:08 AM

    Very nice poetry.
    Visit me please. I follow you please follow me.

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